Gupchup se hum…
Chupchap se aap…
Sirf nazrein hi karti rahi baat…
Saanse hain chup
Seele huye yeh hoth…
Kaan yeh betaab hain…
Sunane ko chahat ki oos…
Ghabrayein hum, sharmayein hum…
Iss rafta si zindagi mein…
Aap hulchul jo le aayenge…
Gujregi raat taaron ke saang…
Din ka chain bhi hoga gum….
Armaano kii baarat hogi….
sapno se saji kaali raat hogi…
Aap hoge, hum hoge
Aur shayad,
Humhare beech kuch baat hogi!!!!
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Its beats, it pumps, it lives, it listens, it feels, it weeps, it speaks,it screams.... it does whatever u feel... Just trying out here what my heart conveys:-)))
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16 comments:
Hie Chaks,
So very nicely written.
Just to communicate between 2 people put in a poem so well :))
vs
How cum such a high EQ chick havent got a b.f? Huh?
@Satan...
LOL.....
Hw is bf related to EQ??:-)))
@Vijay
Thanks dear:-)))
u liked it:-))
@chakli chakoli whtever LOL
well i mean to say that its easy for high EQ female to fall in love or shud I guess u didnt get the equal reciprocation?
@Satan
hahahhahahaha..
again u r trying to nalyse me just on the basis of my writings...;-)))
beautiful verse...
**Saanse hain chup
Seele huye yeh hoth…
Kaan yeh betaab hain…
Sunane ko chahat ki oos…
my fav lines...
u write amazingly well :)
Cheers!!!
@chakoli
again u r trying to nalyse me just on the basis of my writings...;-)))
Well I just hve tht parameter to judge u nothin else....
सुनेंगे हम धड़कने आपकी
सांसो की खामोशी भी
पढेंगे आंखों से लफ्जों को
समझेंगे बेताबी भी
अँधेरी रात मे भी
चांदनी की बरसात होगी
हम साथ होंगे तो
फिर बात ही बात होगी
:)
Cheers!!!
I loved it - absolutely,
conveys a lot of meaning.
& a funny thing - coincidence - maybe, - each time i pen down a poem, & wait 2 post it, & bingo - Chaks put in a poem :))
had just written one @ the summer heat & ur tag came in, so took that first.
This has happened 2wice b4 :))
vs
@ANkur....
You write better then me...I m sure of that:-))
@Satan
Yup you have...but is it necessary to judge people??
@Ankur
loved it:-))
सुनेंगे हम धड़कने आपकी
सांसो की खामोशी भी
पढेंगे आंखों से लफ्जों को
समझेंगे बेताबी भी
@Vs:-)))
LOL....
coincidence at its best:-)))
@Chaks,
Well it not necessary to judge people but its aint wrong either
nice!! me likee :D
loved the last verse...beautiful!
keep writing!!
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