Wednesday, May 7, 2008

One of my early writings...

Chupke se aate ho khawaon mein
Aur needein churate ho…
Dil ki dhadkaano ko
Bhala kyun badate ho..??

Aankhen kholu to
Samne hote ho tum…
Band karu toh…
Khawaon mein chedte ho tum…

Yaad aati hain sharartein tumhari
To muskurati hoon mein…
Gaalon kii laali ko
Haathon se chupati hoon mein…
Kehte hain log ki baabli ho gayi hoon mein….

Ajjeb sa, naya sa …
Yeh Ehsaas hain…
Kya yahi Pyaar hain??


Keep Faith
Chakoli :-)

17 comments:

Ashish Soni said...

have been to your blog earlier too...
but was always in a rush...so never commented

//Ajjeb sa, naya sa …
Yeh Ehsaas hain…
Kya yahi Pyaar hain??//

:) hume kya pata :P :P :P

take care
~ali

Pri said...

ahem ahem!
aisa lagta toh hain! ;)

nice one...

cheers!!

Jyoti said...

ji zarur yeh pyar hi ho sakta hai..
:)

Keep expressing your love, that really feels great

SaTaN said...

Who is the guy???

Ankur said...

**Yaad aati hain sharartein tumhari
To muskurati hoon mein…
Gaalon kii laali ko
Haathon se chupati hoon mein…
Kehte hain log ki baabli ho gayi hoon mein….

wow!!!

yaar... u know wat, u romance so well in ur dreams too, i m jealous ;) ;)
:D
heheh

Cheers!!!

Chakoli said...

@ali:-)))

Arrey pooch rahi hoon na...apne experience se bataiye...jo symptoms hain...usse kya lagta hain aapko...;-)))

Chakoli said...

@pri:-))

Thanks dear:-))

dont worry aisa kuch nahi hain......;-))

Chakoli said...

@jyoti:-0))

hhehehehhehehehe..
its virtual love... nt real....and I wont mind expressing it;-))

Chakoli said...

@satan

still looking fr ....:-(((

Chakoli said...

@Ankur

LOL.....

hehhehehehhehhee..
u r jealous...arrey aap apne fremz mein romance kijiye....koi pareshaan nahi karega..;-))

Ankur said...

haha.. par aap toh nahi hai na waha par ;) ;)

:D
:P
hehehe

Cheers!!!

Ankur said...

प्यार जो एहसास है
वो बहुत खास है
दिल की हर धड़कन पर
अब तुम्हारा नाम है
आंखो में तुम
लबो पर तुम
ख्वाबो में तुम
साँसों में तुम
फिर भी नही जानते है हम
क्या यही प्यार है...

Chakoli said...

@Ankur...

humhare hone na hone se farq nahi padna chaiye...concentrate on "romance".....:PPP

Chakoli said...

@ANkurjeee



Itna kuch kehne ke baad poochte hain aap "kya yahi pyaar hain"...;-)))

SaTaN said...

yeh kya chal raha hein yaha pe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha, sumthin sounds fishy.

I think my EQ is too low to understand things....

Chakoli said...

@satan....


LOL...
tina dimaag mat lagiye.... kuch nahi chal raha...sab changa jee...;-))

Anonymous said...

Waah, Hindi poetry !! I liked this one better than the next one. Maybe because I have written a similar piece. Yours are full of romance. :-)

I too write poetry both in Hindi and English. Have a look when you have time.

Keep writing. :-)

Cuckoo