Izzazat ho aapki
Toh ek khata kar le…
Iss chand ka hum deedaar kar le… :$
Jiski aankhon mein jugnoon ki chamak hain…
Hothon pe pankhudi kii mehek hain..
Gaalon pe gulabon kii rangat hain
Julfoon pe ghataao ka aks hain..
Haaton mein rui kii narmi hain
Pairon mein “chan-chan” payal ki dhwani hain… :d
Naazrein hain betaab
Na karaiye aur intezaar
Ab to in baadalon ko haataiye…
Kii humhe deedar-e-husn karaiye…. :d
Keep Faith
Chakoli :)
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चाँद के दीदार को
बस आइना चाहिए
तेरे हुस्न की महक को
इब्तज़ा कहिये
@Ankur
thanku Thanklu...;-))))
mere liye hain na yeh alfaaz..;-))
bilkul madam... yeh 4 lines toh aapke liye hi hain madam...
:)
kya khoob likha hai again :)
waha wah :)
superb!!!
Cheers!!!
yeh rahi china ki great wall se badi wali smile
:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
very beautifully expressed!!
waise 'ankur' ne bhi ek kavita likhi hain...isi naam se :D
sabko 'deedar' karne ki kya soojh raha hain?? heehee
wapas yaha pe kuch lafda chalu ho gaya hein, kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha.....
Either tum log confuse ho ya logo ko confuse kar rahe ho ya mein hi confuse ho raha hu.
Chaand thoda sharmaa raha hai...
Aur tumhari betaabi bada raha hai...
Asli chaand ko dekhnaa to batlaaooo.
Hajoor aap hi aayine ke saamne khade ho jaaoo...
Phir Saare chaand baadalon main chip jaayenge...Par phir saare "aaftaab"
peeche ho jaayenge
:P :P :P :P :P
tc
@Ankur
tab theek hain...
koi tareef kare to kise pasand nahi aayega...;-))
@pri
Ankur sirjee... ne meri heading chura li...;-)))
bus contents mujse jyada aacha likhe hain...;-))
@Satan
Swizerland ka asar bahut jyada ho gaya hain lagta hain.... itna CONFUSE mat hop///;-))
@Ali:_)))
LOL.....
AAftaab se nahi darte hum....
aakhir chand ka wajood hi hain aftaab ke sang...;-))
@chakoli
mera pleasure :)
@Pri
oyee... mujhe yaad hi nahi raha ki isne same naam se likha hai :-/
hmpf :-/
@Chakoli
mainekuch nahi churaya... huh???
ab kommon naam nahi ho sakte hain kya :D :D
and i still insist, u write better than me... and this u may call as a bad habbit, but i insist :D :D
hindi poetry at its best!!!!! my first bizit, awesome collection. do i add ya?
Good one..
i gotto read it one more time... to comment on it..
oho... ohohho.. i gotit..
good one...
Aye chaand aaj bade muddat ke baad mere yaar ne kuch maanga hai,
hai kasam tujhe aaj tere chandini ki .. tod ke saare bandhan aaja, aur mere yaar ko apni ek jhalak dikhlaja..
:P :P :P :P
wanted to keep that poetic replies running...
@Omi jee:-)))
dhanyawaad jaranawazzi ke liye....
yeh khata hogi humse
jo mane na hum iss gujarish ko...
bandhan to bahut hain...
par todd denge hum sab aaj
akhir milna hain humhe apne chand ko...
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