Tuesday, July 8, 2008

Khwab

Andheri raat mein…
Sapno ke saath…
Aanchal mein yaadein ho…
Aur khwabon mein aap… :z

Chandni kii roshni mein…
Taaron ke taale…
Raangon kii chadar par
Hum-aap udd chalein… :~

Lamhon ki kami na ho…
Aankhon mein nami na ho…
Khusboo mein dooba hoga sama…
Aur honge hum-aap akele wahan … :d

Sehme sehme se honge hum..
Aahat se darega yeh dil…
Haathon mein aapka haath hoga

Pal bhar ke liye aapka saath toh hoga :L

Kash yeh khwab sach ho jaye…
Dua ho kabool
Aur who humhe mil jaye… :y




Chakoli :)





24 comments:

Ankur said...

Amen!

beautiful as always...
and dont think of askin me for my 4 lines.. :P
coz i m too busy and tired these days!! :(

too much work and i catch up with blogs dont know when!!

viju said...

wow,

fantastic, as usual.

u r a true romantic, girl :)

khuda aap kee yeh har tamanna puree karey.

btw. just tagged U :)

vs

Chakoli said...

@ANkur

theek hain theek hain
baksh diya...warna aap to jante hain...hum bakshne walon mein s enahi:PP

Chakoli said...

@Vs:))


hehhehehehehhee

Scorpios are romantic na:PPP


yup will do it:))

Bhushan said...

so many meaningful rhyming lines on this blog..nice one :)

scorpions dont make up 6 billion ppl on earth :P

Unknown said...

nice... real nice...

but weirdly reminds me of the shensha song...
Andheri raaton mein...

Meghna said...

Ooo....bahut badhiya.....hindi mein poetry likhna kitna mushkil hai....tried it 2 or 3 times mislf but nvr cld....vry beautiful....lihte rahoo miss shayer!!!

Love u....can I have another sister (di) in you?? :)

mirage said...

Lovely poem,keep posting:))


mirage

Sachin Garg said...

THe first line made me expect that shahenshah song..
andheri raat mein
sunsaan raho par

but the poem was fun!

Ashish Soni said...

Duwa bhi kuboool hogi
Aur wo bhi tumhe milenge...
Lakhoon main ek hoga woh
Jisse dekh kar duniyaawale Jalenge...

Kuch aaise hi khawaaaish humari bhi hai
Par Chen churaane wali ab tak narar nahi aayi hai


which investment bank u forking for ??

Anonymous said...

ahha..chakoli is at her best ..as alway...speacilly liked the way u started it off...

cheerz!

Unknown said...

awesome :-) JABAB NEHI, great. Great blog.Thank you.

Anonymous said...

Tathastu !
:)

Sameera Ansari said...

Beautiful poem!

May all your dreams come true :)

Saim said...

too gud!!!
hope ur wishes come true..in fact, hope that everyone's wishes come true

Ashish Soni said...

Chakoli Chakoli...
Gayab ho tum deke sabko goli
Na koi update na koi post
Intezaar main hain tumhare blog dost

:) :) :) :)


take care
~Ali

ceedy said...

Nice...my first time here....wonderful....just a stupid technicality....last line...woh instead of WHO...right...itna accha likhne ke baad why keep the options open to WHO make it a sure WOH :)

I am said...

waoo u write poems too :) nice

noticed u are a scorpio too :)
me is very happy :)
what ur date ?

my space said...

aap ke khwaab bahut haseeN haiN!!

Priya Joyce said...

mast likkha hai jhakkas keep it up.

Cinderella said...

Beautiful poetry !

Btw Vrij has a question for you at my page. Answer it couldja ?

♪♪Happy Go Lucky♪♪ said...

now thats really sweet! and nice blog...

hope said...

may your dream come true :)

1st time here.. such a nice blog you have.. you on a break..??

hamaarethoughts.com said...

ha ha haa aa
Amen..;)