Andheri raat mein…
Sapno ke saath…
Aanchal mein yaadein ho…
Aur khwabon mein aap… :z
Chandni kii roshni mein…
Taaron ke taale…
Raangon kii chadar par
Hum-aap udd chalein… :~
Lamhon ki kami na ho…
Aankhon mein nami na ho…
Khusboo mein dooba hoga sama…
Aur honge hum-aap akele wahan … :d
Sehme sehme se honge hum..
Aahat se darega yeh dil…
Haathon mein aapka haath hoga
Pal bhar ke liye aapka saath toh hoga :L
Kash yeh khwab sach ho jaye…
Dua ho kabool
Aur who humhe mil jaye… :y
Chakoli :)
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24 comments:
Amen!
beautiful as always...
and dont think of askin me for my 4 lines.. :P
coz i m too busy and tired these days!! :(
too much work and i catch up with blogs dont know when!!
wow,
fantastic, as usual.
u r a true romantic, girl :)
khuda aap kee yeh har tamanna puree karey.
btw. just tagged U :)
vs
@ANkur
theek hain theek hain
baksh diya...warna aap to jante hain...hum bakshne walon mein s enahi:PP
@Vs:))
hehhehehehehhee
Scorpios are romantic na:PPP
yup will do it:))
so many meaningful rhyming lines on this blog..nice one :)
scorpions dont make up 6 billion ppl on earth :P
nice... real nice...
but weirdly reminds me of the shensha song...
Andheri raaton mein...
Ooo....bahut badhiya.....hindi mein poetry likhna kitna mushkil hai....tried it 2 or 3 times mislf but nvr cld....vry beautiful....lihte rahoo miss shayer!!!
Love u....can I have another sister (di) in you?? :)
Lovely poem,keep posting:))
mirage
THe first line made me expect that shahenshah song..
andheri raat mein
sunsaan raho par
but the poem was fun!
Duwa bhi kuboool hogi
Aur wo bhi tumhe milenge...
Lakhoon main ek hoga woh
Jisse dekh kar duniyaawale Jalenge...
Kuch aaise hi khawaaaish humari bhi hai
Par Chen churaane wali ab tak narar nahi aayi hai
which investment bank u forking for ??
ahha..chakoli is at her best ..as alway...speacilly liked the way u started it off...
cheerz!
awesome :-) JABAB NEHI, great. Great blog.Thank you.
Tathastu !
:)
Beautiful poem!
May all your dreams come true :)
too gud!!!
hope ur wishes come true..in fact, hope that everyone's wishes come true
Chakoli Chakoli...
Gayab ho tum deke sabko goli
Na koi update na koi post
Intezaar main hain tumhare blog dost
:) :) :) :)
take care
~Ali
Nice...my first time here....wonderful....just a stupid technicality....last line...woh instead of WHO...right...itna accha likhne ke baad why keep the options open to WHO make it a sure WOH :)
waoo u write poems too :) nice
noticed u are a scorpio too :)
me is very happy :)
what ur date ?
aap ke khwaab bahut haseeN haiN!!
mast likkha hai jhakkas keep it up.
Beautiful poetry !
Btw Vrij has a question for you at my page. Answer it couldja ?
now thats really sweet! and nice blog...
may your dream come true :)
1st time here.. such a nice blog you have.. you on a break..??
ha ha haa aa
Amen..;)
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